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1 slave who learned to read and write gained selfconfidence, so they were harder to oversee than illiterate slaves. Log in and refer to your paper for the sentences. Do NOT write on the paper.

1 1 slave who learned to read and write gained selfconfidence, so they were harder to oversee than illiterate slaves. Log in and refer to your paper for the sentences. Do NOT write on the paper. Dec 13 7:27 PM Dec 13 7:01 PM 2 When he had learned enough to study on his own, the slave Frederick Douglass did so; he used what he had learned to escape from his owner. 3 The master had told his slaves that all escape routes were blocked and that you would have no chance whatever at success. Dec 13 7:39 PM Dec 13 7:27 PM 4 Douglass used a simple but dangerous method of escape; he sailed from altimore to New York as a working sailor. 5 listener could not learn anything about escape routes from Douglass s stories because Douglass told them nothing that would endanger other fugitives. Dec 13 7:42 PM Dec 13 7:39 PM 1

2 im: How do you eliminate distracting Pronouns Verb Tense im: How do you eliminate distracting his Earl loaned me Earl's lawnmower. Questions Mood and voice Dec 13 8:00 PM Mar 7 7:40 PM im: How do you eliminate distracting im: How do you eliminate distracting I You We I We He one She it They You He one She it They im: How do you eliminate distracting One week our class met in a junkyard to practice rescuing a victim trapped in a wrecked car. We learned to dismantle the car with the essential tools. You were graded on your speed and your skill in extricating the victim. im: How do you eliminate distracting One needs a password and a credit card number to access this database. You will be billed at an hourly rate. 2

im: How do you eliminate distracting police officer is often criticized for always being there when they aren't needed and never

im: How do you eliminate distracting The master had told his slaves that all escape routes were blocked and that you would have

listener could not learn anything about escape routes from Douglass s stories because Douglass told them nothing that would

Dec 13 9:40 PM im: How do you eliminate distracting The master had told his slaves that all escape routes were blocked and that

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3 im: How do you eliminate distracting police officer is often criticized for always being there when they aren't needed and never being there when they are. im: How do you eliminate distracting The master had told his slaves that all escape routes were blocked and that you would have no chance whatever at success. listener could not learn anything about escape routes from Douglass s stories because Douglass told them nothing that would endanger other fugitives. Dec 13 9:40 PM im: How do you eliminate distracting The master had told his slaves that all escape routes were blocked and that they would have no chance whatever at success. im: How do you eliminate distracting Pronouns ll pronouns and antecedents are in the same person. Listeners could not learn anything about escape routes from Douglass s stories because Douglass told them nothing that would endanger other fugitives. ll pronouns and antecedents are the same number. Singular Plural Dec 13 9:40 PM Dec 13 9:48 PM im: How do you eliminate distracting tense shifts? Turn to page Imagine you and your table are editors working at a publishing company. Working with your table, edit the paragraphs in exercise 13 1 to eliminate distracting pronoun shifts. e prepared to "publish" your answers. Mar 4 7:29 M Dec 13 10:00 PM 3

4 1 When online dating first became available, many people thought it would simplify romance. 2 We believed that you could type in a list of criteria sense of humor, college education, green eyes, good job and a database would select the perfect mate. Mar 7 7:36 PM Dec 13 9:56 PM 3 Thousands of people signed up for services and filled out their profiles, confident that true love was only a few mouse clicks away. 4 s it turns out, however, virtual dating is no easier than traditional dating. Dec 13 9:59 PM Dec 13 10:00 PM 5 I still have to contact the people I find, exchange s and phone calls, and meet him in the real world. 6 lthough a database might produce a list of possibilities and screen out obviously undesirable people, you can't predict chemistry. Dec 13 10:01 PM Dec 13 10:04 PM 4

5 7 More often than not, people who seem perfect online just don't click in person. 8 Electronic services do help a single person expand their pool of potential dates, but it's no substitute for the hard work of romance. Dec 13 10:05 PM Dec 13 10:06 PM im: How do you eliminate distracting 5

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