Agenda: 1. Warm Up 2. Notes 3. Guided Practice 4. Discuss Homework Mood and Tone Day One October 15, 2013 Warm Up: Read the following selecon: "Just look at the Titanic. The captain said, 'Even God can't sink this ship.' Then on the first voyage across the Atlanc Ocean, boom, it hit an iceberg and sank. And as soon as a daredevil uers the words 'piece of cake' before aempng a stunt, he is doomed. 'Piece of cake' becomes his 'famous last words.'..." (My Brother's Arm pg.111 112) What is the tone of the selecon? How can you tell? Homework: 1. Connue working on your wring project due Friday 2. bring in TSB novel 3. print study guide on wiki 4. unit test on 10/23 1
Mood Mood is how the writer's words make us feel. Often the setting can help develop and establish the mood of a story or poem. A vivid description of the setting will help us to see, hear, smell, taste, and touch the images; setting the mood. 2
Identify the mood in the following examples. Word Frightened Afraid Scared Anxious Enraged Angry Furious Description "A gust of wind blew through the eaves, and an unearthy moaning sound echoed around them. Ben's head retreated turtle-like into his collar, and even Griffin paled a little." "Griffin and Ben were frozen in shock at the sudden change in their classmate. Never had they heard such a tirade -and certainly not from soft spoken, levelheaded Savannah Drysdale." Mad 3
Circle all of the emotions you might feel from the example below. "Griffin and Ben sat cross-legged on their sleeping bags in what had once been an elegant living room. They were surrounded by shredded drapery, remnants of ancient furnishings, and mounds of dust. All around them, the cavernous old house creaked and groaned with hollow, eerie noises. Outside, a thunderstorm excerpt from Swindle raged." by Gordon Korman Happy Excited Scared Fearful Thrilled Haunting Suspenseful Relaxed 4
Categorize the mood words. Positive Mood Words Negative Mood Words Hopeless Irate Hopeful Relieved Optimistic Excited Furious Light-hearted Terrifying Nervous Joyous Trustful Tense Peaceful Enraged Threatening Frightened Scared Angry Thankful Playful Jealous Disappointed Anxious Confident Liberating Haunting Serious Stressed Suspenseful Uncomfortable Embarrassed Surprised Content 5
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Identify the mood in the following examples. Word Scared Afraid Frightened Anxious Description "A gust of wind blew through the eaves, and an unearthy moaning sound echoed around them. Ben's head retreated turtle-like into his collar, and even Griffin paled a little." Mad Angry Furious Enraged "Griffin and Ben were frozen in shock at the sudden change in their classmate. Never had they heard such a tirade -and certainly not from soft spoken, levelheaded Savannah Drysdale." 7
Categorize the mood words. Positive Mood Words Negative Mood Words Thankful Playful Disappointed Embarrassed Liberating Trustful Serious Nervous Content Peaceful Jealous Stressed Light-hearted Excited Terrifying Uncomfortable Relieved Hopeful Enraged Suspenseful Joyous Optimistic Irate Tense Confident Surprised Furious Angry Haunting Anxious Threatening Frightened Scared Hopeless 8
What Is Tone? You probably know that your tone of voice affects the meaning of what you say. Say each statement aloud using different tones. Have others describe the tone. Statement OK, I ll do it in a minute. That was the best meal I ve ever had. Could you please keep your voice down? Whatever. Possible Tones Word Bank agreeable annoyed bitter bored easygoing exasperated excited genuine happy matter of fact pleading sad sarcastic 9
The Power of Tone You ve just discovered that tone, or a speaker s attitude toward a topic, can have a big impact on listeners. Analyzing tone can help you: understand a speaker s message gain a sense of that person s personality or mood know how to respond to that person determine how your words might be perceived by others 10
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Agenda: 1. Warm Up 2. Tone and Mood Practice 3. Mary Poppins (Mood and Tone examples) 4. "The All American Slurp" October 16, 2013 Mood and Tone Day Two Warm Up: 1. What is the difference between mood and tone? 2. How does an author create mood for their readers? 3. How can you determine the tone of a story? Homework: Final draft due tomorrow Print study guide 3 pages bring in TSB novel quiz on tone, mood & theme Monday U2T Wednesday 14
Mood and Tone Mary Poppins Activity This is the original trailer that was released in 1964. 1. Watch the clip and select three tone words that best represent atude of the trailer's creators. 2. Choose three mood words that describe your feelings aer viewing the piece. 3. How did the trailer's creators create this sense of mood? What aspects of the trailer made you feel this way? original Mary Poppins In the next clip, the creator of the trailer re cut the the movie in a way that represents an enrely new genre of film. 1. Watch the clip and select three tone words that best represent atude of the trailer's creators. 2. Choose three mood words that describe your feelings aer viewing the piece. 3. How did the trailer's creators create this sense of mood? What aspects of the trailer made you feel this way? Scary Mary Poppins 15
"The All American Slurp" pg. 443 Background Information: 16
"The All American Slurp" pg.444 Directions: Find examples of characters' thoughts, words and actions that contribute to the tone of "The All-American Slurp. Record the examples in a chart like the one shown. Which details do you think have the strongest effect on the tone of the story? Why? Thoughts Words Actions -(narrator) The menu is so big that she almost has to stand up to read it -she "died at least fifty times" from embarrassment -The cubicle in the restaurant wouldn't make a suitable residence. -(Mrs. Lin) "Oh, that's quite all right!" -"You're Welcome!" -(the Lins) pack themselves into a sofa -pull the strings from the celery -slurp their food loudly 17
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