A follow-up study of airway symptoms and lung function among residents and workers 5.5 years after an oil tank explosion.

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1 Author s response to reviews Title: A follow-up study of airway symptoms and lung function among residents and workers 5.5 years after an oil tank explosion. Authors: Jens-Tore Granslo (jens-tore.granslo@helse-bergen.no) Magne Bråtveit (magne.bratveit@isf.uib.no) Bjørg Eli Hollund (bjoerg.eli.hollund@helse-bergen.no) Stein Håkon Låstad Lygre (stein.hakon.lastad.lygre@helse-bergen.no) Cecilie Svanes (cecilie.svanes@helse-bergen.no) Bente Elisabeth Moen (bente.moen@isf.uib.no) Version: 3 Date: 17 Dec 2016 Author s response to reviews: PULM-D R2 A follow-up study of airway symptoms and lung function among residents and workers 5.5 years after an oil tank explosion. Jens-Tore Granslo; Magne Bråtveit; Bjørg Eli Hollund; Stein Håkon Låstad Lygre; Cecilie Svanes; Bente Elisabeth Moen BMC Pulmonary Medicine To the Editor Thank you for your constructive comments, and the possibility to submit a third manuscript. We have responded to the comments from the editorial team, and hope the manuscript now is acceptable for publication in your journal. Our response to the comments of the Associated editor (AE) is presented below. The line and page numbers refer to the revised manuscript. Track changes are removed from the revised manuscript and only a clean copy are uploaded.

2 Editorial Requests: Please ensure that all parts of the declarations section are included as per our submission guidelines ( Please be aware that ALL sections are compulsory and any section that is not relevant to this article should still be included with 'not applicable' stated for that section. Please see the full list of declarations to include at the foot of this Please revise the manuscript so it contains the sections as per our submission guidelines: Response to 2: We have revised the manuscript in accordance with the submission guidelines. 3. On uploading your revisions, please remove any tracked changes or highlighting and include only a single clean copy. Response to 3: We have removed tracked changes or highlighting and include only a single clean copy in the present revised manuscript Declarations > List of abbreviations If abbreviations are used in the text they should be defined in the text at first use, and a list of abbreviations should be provided. Response: Abbreviations used in the text are defined when first used, and there is a list of abbreviations in the Abbreviations section line 1-5, page 18, in the revised manuscript. > Ethics approval and consent to participate Manuscripts reporting studies involving human participants, human data or human tissue must:

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5 Response: Authors contribution are included in the Declarations section line 12-14, page 18 and line 1-3, page 19 in the revised manuscript.