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1 Fordham University School of Law From the SelectedWorks of Hon. Gerald Lebovits September, 2009 Proof It with Re-Vision Part I Gerald Lebovits Available at:
2 SEPTEMBER 2009 VOL. 81 NO. 7 Journal NEW YORK STATE BAR ASSOCIATION Maybe Mom and Dad Were Right Musings on the Economic Downturn by Gary A. Munneke Special Issue on Law Practice Management with Articles by Rachel J. Littman Arthur G. Greene Anthony E. Davis and David J. Elkanich Sharon D. Nelson and John W. Simek
3 THE LEGAL WRITER BY GERALD LEBOVITS Prove Proof It With Revision Re-vision Part I Lawyers can be many things: advocates, counselors, negotiators. Regardless which roles they find themselves in, lawyers will inevitably edit and proofread their own work and the work of others. This two-part column offers revision tips for legal writers. Some use editing and proofreading interchangeably. But the terms describe different stages of revision. 1 Editing occurs throughout the writing process, especially between drafts. Editing produces changes that affect overall meaning and presentation. Editing focuses on content and organization. The goal in editing is to clarify, condense, and strengthen communication. 2 Proofreading takes place later in the writing process. Proofreading is about correcting mechanical errors like spelling, typographical mistakes, and omitted words. Proofreading is a methodical effort to spot errors. 3 Editing and proofreading are not the final steps of an almost-finished product. They re an integral part of the writing process. Different models describe revision. The stage-process model assumes that writing is linear, that writing is divided into stages. 4 Inexperienced writers write linearly. They divide projects into prewriting, writing, revising, and polishing. They make surface changes and fix obvious errors but keep substance. 5 Inexperienced writers most frequent edit is a meaning-preserving substitution of words they originally chose. Inexperienced writers place symbolic importance on their selection and rejection of words as the determiners of success or failure of their compo- sitions. 6 Inexperienced writers miss organization and analysis problems. 7 Experienced writers find the stageprocess model flawed. Writing isn t linear. Experienced writers progress cyclically. They go back and forth from start to finish. 8 This is the recursive model, in which writers continuously revisit and improve their writing by switching roles and becoming readers. The recursive process allows writers to re-see their writing from the reader s perspective. 9 Re-seeing requires a involves generating ideas in a streamof-consciousness mode. 12 Third, they should revisit all their decisions. This includes attending to audience and purpose. 13 Re-seeing deemphasizes meaning-preserving changes and stresses overall goals. 14 The key to re-seeing is to divide editing and proofreading into macro-level revisions and micro-level revisions. Macro-revisions improve organization and substance. 15 Micro-revisions fix surface errors. 16 If the route to good writing is rewriting, the route to good rewriting is re-seeing. change in attitude. With that change, writers will uncover better solutions. If the route to good writing is rewriting, the route to good rewriting is reseeing. 10 Legal writers should use three reseeing habits. First, they should resolve dissonance, the disharmony between what authors write and what they want to write. 11 Dissonance is resolved by brainstorming with mind-maps, prewriting materials, and outlines. Mind-maps are diagrams that represent words and ideas around a central idea. Prewriting materials help writers organize their thoughts before they write. Outlines help writers put those thoughts into headings and subheadings to structure the text. Second, they should revise to explore new ideas and generate new writing. One way to explore new ideas is through zero-drafting. Zero-drafting Macro Revisions Macro revisions look at the big picture: coherence, meaning, and order. 17 Writers should start macro-revising by analyzing their document s large-scale organization to ensure that information flows logically from beginning to end. Next, writers should look at small-scale organization the organization within a paragraph. Writers should check their document to ensure that the material is organized for the audience. This means writing clearly and giving readers effective roadmaps, headings, and subheadings. Large-Scale Organization Overall organization includes the order of paragraphs and sections. Organization relates to structure. When editing for organization, writers should read their entire document once CONTINUED ON PAGE September 2009 NYSBA Journal
4 THE LEGAL WRITER CONTINUED FROM PAGE 64 or twice and reread the first and last paragraphs. Then they should address five questions: 18 Does the lead give a roadmap, also called a thesis? The lead tells the reader what will be covered and in what order. The lead should tempt the reader to continue. The lead establishes the document s tone and direction. Legal writing is an inverted pyramid, with conclusion coming first and the details afterward. The lead is the conclusion. If the reader reads nothing else, the lead should be enough. Does each paragraph make only one point? A paragraph with more than one point should be broken down to keep ideas together. Is each concept discussed once and in one place? Organize thoughts into sections. Each section should address one large issue. By grouping thoughts together, writers can move through topics without repetition. Do transitions connect ideas, people, places, things, and time? Transitions establish logical connections between sentences, paragraphs, and sections. Transitions are segues that allow a logical, coherent argument. Transitions allow writers to present essential information and then create relationships between the information and the argument. Repeating key words and concepts is an effective transitional device. Deliberate repetition bridges gaps. Used incorrectly, repetition is obtrusive and boring. Used correctly, repetition creates rhythm and enhances readability. Pronouns are useful transitions to refer to something earlier in the text. Example: The lawyer was current on the law. His ability to recall cases made him a good litigator. The pronoun his forces the reader to refer to what his relates to: The lawyer. Other transitions include it, they, this, and them. Example: Some lawyers research only online. This method is inadequate. When using transitions, writers must avoid vague referents. If the transition might refer to more than one word, repeat the word. Another transitional device is to use little conjunctions like and, but, for, nor, or, and yet and conjunctive adverbs like nevertheless or on the other hand. Little conjunctions come naturally to writers. They re distracting when overused. A balance between little conjunctions and conjunctive adverbs promotes readability. Does the concluding paragraph reach the desired destination? The concluding, or thesis, paragraph should summarize the document s main points, suggest results, evoke images, or call for action. 19 The concluding paragraph shouldn t discuss ideas not mentioned previously. Small-Scale Organization Organization on the small scale focuses on organizing ideas within paragraphs, the building blocks of writing. Every paragraph needs a focus to enable the reader to move through the paragraph. 20 Paragraphs must also connect to the information around them. To do so, paragraphs should begin with a transition sentence a sentence that connects one paragraph to the next or a topic sentence. The topic sentence is to the paragraph what the lead, or roadmap, is to the document. Every sentence after the topic sentence should relate to the paragraph s focus. Topic sentences are not restricted to the paragraph s first sentence. Experienced writers who want to emphasize earlier examples or details might put the topic sentence in the paragraph s second slot. 21 Create a topic sentence by imagining that the paragraph has a title or theme. The title or theme is the topic sentence. A thesis sentence should come at the end of the paragraph. The thesis sentence should conclude what the topic sentence introduced. The thesis sentence answers the topic sentence. If the topic sentence and thesis sentence were the only parts of the paragraph with the middle cut out the reader should still understand the writer s point. The thesis sentence should also lead the reader into the next paragraph. To connect sentences within a paragraph, writers should underline the first few words of every sentence and clause in every paragraph. The underlined words should be consistent with each other. Writers should put themselves in the reader s shoes to make the sentences cohesive. Readers should be able to move easily from one sentence to the next with the sense that each sentence is unified within the paragraph s larger structure. Every sentence must relate to the sentences that precede and follow them. Every sentence must also relate to the topic and thesis sentences. A common legal-writing paragraph pattern is V-shaped. A V-shaped paragraph begins with a general discussion of the topic and then narrows to the specific support. This paragraph doesn t return to a general statement at the end. 22 Organize Material for the Audience Audience-oriented editing guides readers with headings, roadmaps, and charts. In checking a document s organization from the reader s point of view, writers must look for overall effectiveness. To make organization effective, writers can outline the headings and subheadings from the finished draft. Doing that will make the topics flow in an orderly way and arrive at a clear conclusion. Four components create an outline apparent to readers: parallelism, coordination, subordination, and division. 23 Maintaining parallel structure between headings and subheadings means that if the first heading is stated as a verb, the second should also be in verb form: CONTINUED ON PAGE 52 NYSBA Journal September
5 THE LEGAL WRITER CONTINUED FROM PAGE 51 Heading 1: Choosing a business entity for your new company Heading 2: Forming a corporate structure To coordinate properly, information in one heading should be as significant as information in the other headings. Similarly, information in one subheading should be as significant as information in the other subheadings: Heading 1: Choosing a business entity for your new company Subheading A: General partnership Subheading B: Limited liability company Subheading C: Corporation Heading 2: Forming a corporate structure Subheading A: Distribution of corporate power Subheading B: Action by directors Subheading C: Action by shareholders In the example above, Headings 1 and 2 describe broad, weighty topics. The subheadings carry particularized information. The subheadings under Heading 1 have the same significance: They look at different kinds of business-entity possibilities for a new company. The subheadings are also equal in Heading 2. They consider the factors in forming a corporate structure, one of the chosen entities under Heading 1. To subordinate, and thereby distinguish between headings and subheadings, the information in the headings should be more general than the information in the subheadings. In the above example, each of the six subheadings deals with specific aspects under the generalized heading s umbrella. Each heading should be divided into two or more parts. In the above example, Heading 1 is divided into three subheadings, each for a different business entity. As an audienceoriented organization strategy, dividing headings allows writers to break down larger topics into smaller pieces to allow the reader to absorb information. Headings should describe information and suggest content. 24 Generic headings like Facts, Law, and Conclusion aren t helpful. Audience-Oriented Changes These changes look to clarity, style, and tone. When editing for the audience the reader writers should undergo an out-of-body experience. By placing themselves into the reader s position, writers are able to see their documents from a new perspective: Would someone approaching the document for the first time understand what the writer wants to convey? The message should be clear from the start, maintain clarity throughout, and arrive at a logical conclusion. Editing for clarity is hard. Clarity for writers comes at the end of the writing process, once they ve hashed out their thoughts. Clarity for readers must come from the outset. To write clearly, writers should start with the essentials. They should give the rules before the exceptions. They should state general propositions before specific ones. They should introduce concepts before they discuss them. They should assume that readers know nothing about the case. Here are five ways to edit out unclarity: Negatives. Write in the positive. Negatives hinder comprehension. Negatives require readers to invert their logic to determine what something isn t. 25 No and not turn positives into negatives. Prefixes like non- and un- also derail clarity. Writers should watch out for words that operate negatively, including except, however, and unless. Nominalizations. Nominalizations are verbs turned into nouns. Incorrect: The court made a decision. Becomes: The court decided. Nominalizations make documents confusing, long, and stuffy, not concise and crisp. Passives. In passive-voice sentences, the subject isn t doing the action but rather is being acted Good editing recognizes that readers are busy professionals. upon. The passive voice uses the verb be with a past participle. Single passives defy readers expectations. Readers expect to see subject, verb, object, in that order. Double passives obscure the actor. Readers expect to know who s doing what to whom. To correct improper passives, look for the subject of the sentence. Ask whether the subject performed the action described by the verb. 26 If the answer is yes, the writer has used the active voice. Metadiscourse. State your point without the wasted run-up, or throat-clearing openings. Cut to the chase. Examples include airy statements like We believe that.... or Needless to say,.... Throat-clearers are helpful when writing a draft. They keep up momentum. While editing, writers should eliminate these unnecessary expressions. 27 Modifiers. Words or phrases that modify some other word or phrase in a sentence should be firmly joined. Incorrect dangling modifier: Having arrived late to the meeting, a formal apology was necessary. This sentence means that the formal apology arrived late. Correct: Having arrived late to the meeting, the lawyer needed to give a formal apology. Incorrect misplaced modifier: The Defendant was sentenced to jail for assault in court. This sentence suggests that the assault was committed in court. Correct: The court sentenced the Defendant to jail for assault. The problem with editing for style is that style is subjective. Writers reading their own work might believe that 52 September 2009 NYSBA Journal
6 their point is conveyed clearly. This is where having an editor will help. Editing for style means checking for wordiness. Sentences should be clear and strong. Beyond clarity and coherence, good writing style embraces eloquence. Eloquent writing features antithesis, parallelism, metaphors, and similes. 28 Tone is important, too. Legal writers must maintain a professional tone and respect for the reader and avoid humor, sarcasm, and rhetorical questions. 29 Formal documents shouldn t omit articles like a, an, and the or use contractions, slash (virgule) constructions ( and/or, he/she ), abbreviations, or undefined acronyms. Good editing recognizes that readers are busy professionals. This column will continue in the October 2009 Journal with macro-revisions, proofreading, and proofreader marks. GERALD LEBOVITS is a judge at the New York City Civil Court, Housing Part, in Manhattan and an adjunct professor at St. John s University School of Law. For her research help, Judge Lebovits thanks New York Law School student Laura Graham. Judge Lebovits s address is GLebovits@aol.com. 1. Terri LeClercq, Re-Vision Before Editing, 49 Tex. B.J. 838, 838 (Sept. 1986). 2. Brooke J. Bowman, Writing Tips, Learning the Art of Rewriting and Editing A Perspective, 15 Perspectives: Teaching Legal Research & Writing 54 (Fall 2006), available at abstract= (last visited July 14, 2009) (quoting Debra Hart May, Proofreading Plain & Simple 45 (1997)). 3. Id. (quoting Diana Hacker, Rules for Writers (5th ed. 2004)). 4. Christopher M. Anzidei, The Revision Process in Legal Writing: Seeing Better to Write Better, 8 Legal Writing (J. Legal Writing Inst.) 23, 28 (2002). 5. Lester Faigley & Stephen Witte, Analyzing Revision, 32 College Composition and Communication 400, 407 (Dec. 1981), available at 12%2932%3A4%3C400%3AAR%3E2.0.CO%3B2-Y (last visited July 14, 2009). 6. Nancy Sommers, Revision Strategies of Student Writers and Experienced Adult Writers, in Landmark Essays on Writing Process 75, 79 (Sondra Perl ed. 1995). 7. Patricia Grande Montana, Better Revision: Encouraging Student Writers to See Through the Eyes of the Reader, 14 Legal Writing (J. Legal Writing Inst.) 291, ), available at abstract= (last visited July 14, 2009). 8. Anzidei, supra note 4, at 29 30; Natalie Tarenko, Can the Windowpane Speak? Re-evaluating Orwell s Metaphor, 22 Bul. Leg. Writing 1, 9 (Fall 2007) (discussing writing as cyclical rather than static process). 9. Anzidei, supra note 4, at 34; Patricia Grande Montana, Sending the Message to Students that Revising Means Seeing their Work Through New Eyes, 22 Bul. Leg. Writing 1, 6 (Fall 2007) (suggesting that students who revise most successfully set aside their perspective as writers and review their work from the reader s point of view). 10. Sommers, supra note 6, at 81; Linda L. Berger, A Reflective Rhetorical Model: The Legal Writing Teacher as Reader and Writer, 6 Leg. Writing (J. Legal Writing Inst.) 57, 61 (2000) (describing how writing involves not only constructing documents but also constructing thoughts). 11. Anzidei, supra note 4, at Susan M. Taylor, Legal Writing Symposium, Students as (Re)visionaries: Or, Revision, Revision, Revision, 21 Touro L. Rev. 265, (2005). 13. Anzidei, supra note 4, at Taylor, supra note 12, at Anzidei, supra note 4, at Id. at Taylor, supra note 12, at These suggestions come from Tom Goldstein & Jethro K. Lieberman, The Lawyer s Guide to Writing Well 156 (2d ed. 2002) (describing five questions writers should ask themselves when editing for structure). 19. Concluding Paragraphs, commnet.edu/grammar/composition/endings. htm (last visited July 14, 2009). 20. Anne Enquist & Laurel Currie Oates, Just Writing: Grammar, Punctuation, and Style for the Legal Writer 3.2, at 35 (2d ed. 2005). 21. Goldstein & Lieberman, supra note 18, at Enquist & Oates, supra note 20, 3.3.1, at Purdue Univ. Writing Lab, Developing an Outline, resource/544/01/ (last visited July 14, 2009). 24. Cheryl Stephens, Legal Writing: Structuring a Better Legal Memorandum or Opinion 3, cherylstephens.com/professional/communication/organization.pdf (last visited July 14, 2009). 25. K.K. DuVivier, The Scrivener: Modern Legal Writing, Plain English Part VI: Negatives or the Power of Positives, 27 Colo. Law. 47, 47 (Nov. 1998), available at Lawyering_Process_%5CDuvivier_articles/ nov% pdf (last visited July 14, 2009). 26. Linda Edwards, Legal Writing: Process, Analysis, and Organization 222 (4th ed. 2006). 27. Enquist & Oates, supra note 20, 6.2.5, at Id , at Edwards, supra note 26, at 214. NEW YORK STATE BAR ASSOCIATION Annual Meeting location has been moved Hilton New York 1335 Avenue of the Americas New York City January 25-30, 2010 NYSBA Journal September
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